Topic
Sentence : The Advantages of Globalization in Indonesian Economics Field.
The influence of globalization in the world will continue to grow time by time and create new innovation in various fields, one of them in economics field.
The influence of globalization in the world will continue to grow time by time and create new innovation in various fields, one of them in economics field.
Supporting
Sentence 1 : Free of Internasional Markets.
The most big impact of globalization in the economy is the creation of freedom on the international market for buying and selling products / services comes from several countries.
The most big impact of globalization in the economy is the creation of freedom on the international market for buying and selling products / services comes from several countries.
Supporting
Sentence 2 : Ease in Exports and Import Activities.
The presence of international markets due to globalization in the economic sector has created an ease in export and import activities.
The presence of international markets due to globalization in the economic sector has created an ease in export and import activities.
Supporting
Sentence 3 : Entry of Foreign Companies into a Indonesia.
The flow of globalization in the field of economics automatically makes a country open because companies from overseas can freely enter a country and open up opportunities for products from global markets to enter the domestic market.
Concluding Sentence : So, globalization has an important impact in the world economy. Because of that, Indonesia also has a lot of benefits, especially in the economics field . The most prominent is the increasingly free international market, the ease of doing export and import activities and the number of foreign companies that are easy to enter and develop in Indonesia.
The flow of globalization in the field of economics automatically makes a country open because companies from overseas can freely enter a country and open up opportunities for products from global markets to enter the domestic market.
Concluding Sentence : So, globalization has an important impact in the world economy. Because of that, Indonesia also has a lot of benefits, especially in the economics field . The most prominent is the increasingly free international market, the ease of doing export and import activities and the number of foreign companies that are easy to enter and develop in Indonesia.
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HapusLove your article,keep the good work!
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HapusThat's a great topic. The outline also good. Good job!
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HapusCan't wait your essay, your outlines its quite good
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HapusWoah your major supports are interesting. It is informative, can't wait for your next essay! Good job vera~
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HapusHi!. I found your outline is very interesting. however, your conclusion which is "Therefore, we as Indonesian people (citizen) who live in this modern era must be able to faced and respond this globalization wisely.", I think it doesn't have any correlation with the other point of your outline. But, I like your topic
BalasHapusthank you for the input and suggestions, I will try to fix it so that it will be better in the future. Your advice means a lot for me
HapusWhat a great topic you have choose, keep on writting !
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HapusGood content and really inspireful articles, keep it upp Vera
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HapusWhat a great topic 👏🏻. Good job ! Keep spirit !!
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HapusI’m looking forward to see the bigger picture of the essay and probably your next topic!
BalasHapusin addition, to conclude the essay, try to give the exact answer or your main opinion regarding the case which followed by the analytical reason and supporting data
furthermore, in main body or analysis part, you can put more sources to strengthen your statement
GOOD JOB VERA!
thank you for the input and suggestions, I will try to fix it so that it will be better in the future. Your advice means a lot for me
HapusHi Vera! Your outline has good structured, good job ^^
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Hapuswow, it's a nice topic and a good supporting sentence. God job girl!!!
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HapusIts a great topic. Good job!!
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Hapusgreat outline and interesting topic in economic sight. great job
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Hapusgreat topic. eventhough it's simple, but it still clear and easy to understand, thankyou for the information!
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