Introductory
Paragraph
1 Sentence
Learning is the
process of acquiring new, or modifying existing, knowledge, behaviors, skills,
values, or preferences.
2 Sentence
There is quote about learning that said “the brighter you are, the more you have to learn”.
There is quote about learning that said “the brighter you are, the more you have to learn”.
3 Sentence
Not just for
people who already brighter but everyone understand that learning is one of the
important things that their have must to do.
4 Sentence
For me learning can be done by reading, hearing, and
watching youtube.
Body Paragraph
1. TOPIC SENTENCE : Learning by reading.
Major Supporting Sentences: kind of books that i like to read.
·
Minor Supporting
Sentences:
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motivational
·
biography
·
encyclopedias
2. TOPIC SENTENCE : Learning by hearing (Auditori)
Major
Supporting Sentences: the best learning
method for auditory.
·
Minor Supporting
Sentences:
·
discuss,sharing and listen others
opinion
·
listening music
·
listen
to the lecturer’s recording.
3. TOPIC SENTENCE : Learning by watching digital
media.
Major
Supporting Sentences: the advantages of watching youtube.
·
Minor Supporting
Sentences:
·
a lot of information
·
develop and increase inovation and
creativity
·
up to date news.
Concluding Paragraph
So,
from learing by reading, hearing (auditori), and watching youtube motivated me to
become a better human . I still learning time by time , i will never stop doing
that because i know this is an important thing that i have must to do.
Learning
is the process of acquiring new, or modifying existing, knowledge, behaviors,
skills, values, or preferences. There is quote about learning that said “the
brighter you are, the more you have to learn”. Not just for people who already
brighter but everyone and me understand that learning is one of the important
things that our have must to do. For me learning can be done by reading,
hearing, and watching youtube.
There was three kind of books that i like to
read. First is motivational book. Motivational books are books that contain
psychological studies to arouse passion or enthusiasm for their readers. It can be arranged based on others experience.
Usually this book is often written by entrepreneurs. I am very happy because in this book there are
many spirit tips from that writer. Usually they write their experiences until they
reach a point of success after going through a long process. By reading this
motivational book, I feel I have gotten new energy to continue living and the
spirit to continue working. Second is biography book. A biography is a story
or information about a person's life. This biography contains more complex and
detailed.The reason I like this because in this book not only we know the date of birth, someone's
work and achievements, but we can find out about the feelings in all kinds of
accident or tragedy involved in their life process. The last is
encyclopedias. Encyclopedias are a number of books that contain
an explanation of each branch of science arranged alphabetically or according
to categories in a concise and concise manner.
An encyclopedia provides
an explanation in more depth than what I was looking for. This book describes each
article as a phenomenon.
Not just by reading, I can usually learn new
things by hearing. There are 3 ways to apply this auditory method
properly. First, learn by discussing,sharing and listen others opinions. From this, I can see how
others perceive the world around us. The more I hear and listen carefully about
others’ opinion , I can get a lot of things. This gives me more knowledge and a
wider insight about different matters. Second is listening music. By listening music,
especially English music, I feel more comfortable and easy to understand the
vocabulary and meaning contained in it. Third is listen to the
lecturer’s recording. I used to learn by recording when the teacher
taught then later I tried listening to the tape again. Learning in this way
makes it easier for me to understand and remember material that lecturer delivered
in the past.
Above that, in this era of globalization, I can
learn via digital media, for example I can learn by watching. It makes my
learning process more effective and efficient. I can get more and more new
knowledge by watching such as Youtube. There was some advantages of watching Youtube.
First is I easy to get information because all the things that I want to know,
all the information I might need can be accessed easily by utilizing the
facilities that I have in my possession. Just need to bring my phone, access
the Internet and see all the information that I would need. Second is evelop
and increase inovation and creativity. If a student or student can create and
upload their own videos to Youtube, then students and students have been
considered technology literate. That way, students and students can manage
their own YouTube channel of positive content and can provide benefits to
others as well. Not only that, students can also download educational videos
that can help them gain insight and solve problems on certain subjects. Third
is up to date news. One of
which was political news which did have a greater appeal for me. By
learning through youtube really helped me to be able to know the
current issue in my country and criticize the
policies made by the government.
So,
from learing by reading, hearing (auditori), and watching youtube motivated me to
become a better human . I still learning time by time , i will never stop doing
that because i know this is an important thing that i have must to do.
Hello vera, your essay its good but i think you must check again your spelling because too much wrong typing
BalasHapusGood job Vera
thank you for the input and suggestions, I will try to fix it so that it will be better in the future. Your advice means a lot for me
HapusHello vera, this is a good article maybe in the next you can found the another pictures ...😂😂
BalasHapusthank you for the input and suggestions, I will try to fix it so that it will be better in the future. Your advice means a lot for me
Hapus
BalasHapusVera, maybe you can explain more detail about your article ...
But it is a good article
thank you for the input and suggestions, I will try to fix it so that it will be better in the future. Your advice means a lot for me
HapusI love reading and listening music too, develop your essay more, keep on going!
BalasHapusthank you for the input and suggestions, I will try to fix it so that it will be better in the future. Your advice means a lot for me
HapusHello vera! I love reading and listening to music too but I think it will be much better if you develop your essay more and the grammar of your writting, and also I enjoyed reading your article a lot. Thank You ��
BalasHapusthank you for the input and suggestions, I will try to fix it so that it will be better in the future. Your advice means a lot for me
HapusThis is good, i love your article!💕
BalasHapusim so happy,thank you :)
HapusVery good article. But, there are so many ways to improve it such as the content itself should include some examples and recommendations for readers to read, listen, or watch. Good job
BalasHapusthank you for the input and suggestions, I will try to fix it so that it will be better in the future. Your advice means a lot for me
HapusHi Vera!!
BalasHapusThe article is good, but I think you may do recheck cause there are some typo especially for learning term and also for “i” please write it in capital “I”.
Good Luck
thank you for the input and suggestions, I will try to fix it so that it will be better in the future. Your advice means a lot for me
HapusHello vera! It is a good essay, learning by watching digital media and learning by hearing make us easy to study, especially for learning language.
BalasHapusGood job vera, fighting!
thank you for the input and suggestions, I will try to fix it so that it will be better in the future. Your advice means a lot for me
HapusI am so appreciate your essay, i just want to give your suggestion that you must recheck your grammar and make it clearly sentences. Thank you, have a nice day
BalasHapusthank you for the input and suggestions, I will try to fix it so that it will be better in the future. Your advice means a lot for me
HapusYour article is so inspiring, I love it �� but maybe you can improve your grammar. Overall it's a great article ��
BalasHapusthank you for the input and suggestions, I will try to fix it so that it will be better in the future. Your advice means a lot for me
HapusGreat article, Vera! Although there are still a lot of room for improvement in term of grammar, overall it is a very good writing. Good job and keep on learning!
BalasHapusthank you for the input and suggestions, I will try to fix it so that it will be better in the future. Your advice means a lot for me
HapusHi Vera, very nice and inspirative article, but maybe you need to re-check about typing because i found some wrong words and some content repeated. Besides that, overall is good. Good Job Vera
BalasHapusthank you for the input and suggestions, I will try to fix it so that it will be better in the future. Your advice means a lot for me
HapusHello, i like this article!
BalasHapusGood explanation but i think you should be more carefull next time before you upload your article, you can double check your spelling because there are some typo in some sentences. You can also improve your grammar, but good job :D
thank you for the input and suggestions, I will try to fix it so that it will be better in the future. Your advice means a lot for me
HapusHelll vera, what a good essay. But if you would be better,you can give a thesis sentences in outline introduction paragraph.because i didnt found it. But overall clear. Good job ver!!
BalasHapusthank you for the input and suggestions, I will try to fix it so that it will be better in the future. Your advice means a lot for me
HapusI would like to say thank you to all those who have provided input and suggestions for my second article.Your advice means a lot for me. Thank you for the time and hopefully my sharing today can have a positive impact. I will try and learn to be better in the future. Once Again, thank you.
BalasHapusREVISION :
Introductory Paragraph
1 Sentence
Learning is the process of acquiring new, modifying existing, knowledge, behaviors, skills, values, or preferences.
2 Sentence
There is a quote about learning that said “the brighter you are, the more you have to learn”.
3 Sentence
Not just for people who already brighter but everyone understand that learning is one of the important things that their have must to do.
4 Sentence
For me learning can be done by reading, hearing, and watching youtube.
Body Paragraph
1. TOPIC SENTENCE : Learning by reading.
Major Supporting Sentences: kind of books that I like to read.
•Minor Supporting Sentences:
•motivational
•biography
•encyclopedias
2. TOPIC SENTENCE : Learning by hearing (Auditori)
Major Supporting Sentences: the best learning method for auditory.
•Minor Supporting Sentences:
•discuss,sharing and listen others opinion
•listening music
•listen to the lecturer’s recording.
3. TOPIC SENTENCE : Learning by watching digital media.
Major Supporting Sentences: the advantages of watching youtube.
•Minor Supporting Sentences:
•a lot of information
•develop and increase inovation and creativity
•up to date news.
Concluding Paragraph
So, from learning by reading, hearing (auditori), and watching youtube motivated me to become a better human . I still learning time by time , I will never stop doing that because I know this is an important thing that I have must to do.
CONTINUE...
Learning is the process of acquiring new, modifying existing, knowledge, behaviors, skills, values, or preferences. There is a quote about learning that said “the brighter you are, the more you have to learn”. Not just for people who already brighter but everyone and me understand that learning is one of the important things that our have must to do. For me learning can be done by reading, hearing, and watching youtube.
HapusThere was three kind of books that I like to read. First is motivational book. Motivational books are books that contain psychological studies to arouse passion or enthusiasm for their readers. It can be arranged based on others experience. Usually this book is often written by entrepreneurs. I am very happy because in this book there are many spirit tips from that writer. Usually they write their experiences until they reach a point of success after going through a long process. By reading this motivational book, I feel I have gotten new energy to continue living and the spirit to continue working. Example the book from Merry Riana. Second is biography book. A biography is a story or information about a person's life. This biography contains more complex and detailed.The reason I like this because in this book not only we know the date of birth, someone's work and achievements, but we can find out about the feelings in all kinds of accident or tragedy involved in their life process. The last is encyclopedias. Encyclopedias are a number of books that contain an explanation of each branch of science arranged alphabetically or according to categories in a concise and concise manner. An encyclopedia provides an explanation in more depth than what I was looking for. This book describes each article as a phenomenon.
Not just by reading, I can usually learn new things by hearing. There are 3 ways to apply this auditory method properly. First, learn by discussing, sharing and listen others opinions. From this, I can see how others perceive the world around us. The more I hear and listen carefully about others’ opinion , I can get a lot of things. This gives me more knowledge and a wider insight about different matters. Second is listening music. By listening music, especially english genre music, I feel more comfortable and easy to understand the vocabulary and meaning contained in it. Third is listen to the lecturer’s recording. I used to learn by recording when the teacher taught then later I tried listening to the tape again. Learning in this way makes it easier for me to understand and remember material that lecturer delivered in the past.
Above that, in this era of globalization, I can learn via digital media, for example I can learn by watching. It makes my learning process more effective and efficient. I can get more and more new knowledge by watching such as Youtube. There was some advantages of watching Youtube. First is I easy to get information because all the things that I want to know, all the information I might need can be accessed easily by utilizing the facilities that I have in my possession. Just need to bring my phone, access the Internet and see all the information that I would need. Second is develop and increase inovation and creativity. If a student can create and upload their own videos to Youtube, then students have been considered technology literate. That way, students can manage their own YouTube channel of positive content and can provide benefits to others as well. Not only that, students can also download educational videos that can help them gain insight and solve problems on certain subjects. Third is up to date news. One of which was political news which did have a greater appeal for me. By learning through youtube really helped me to be able to know the current issue in my country and criticize the policies made by the government.
So, from learning by reading, hearing (auditori) and watching youtube motivated me to become a better human . I still learning time by time , I will never stop doing that because I know this is an important thing that I have must to do.